The Official Writing Challenge
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05/18/18
Powerful word imagery. I felt her emotions...

Wing His Words
I read eagerly, waiting to get understanding in this intense situation. I forced myself to not skim down to glimpse the conclusion. I felt disappoint to get no understanding of the trial. I did understand your desire as a writer to give the glory to God, but I was left suspended, wondering what was the end of the story.

Good job of hooking the reader.
This is beautiful and just what I needed as I'm waiting to get ready for my son's wedding. You reminded me of what is truly important.