The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/18
I loved the different scenes with all of their poignancy. And you ended it all very well. Great job. Well written.
05/11/18
You've captured our current issues well in this emotionally charged piece. As I read, the true news stories behind your words jumped into my mind. Until I reached the closing paragraphs, my heart felt overwhelmed by the painful recollections. Your ending was the real spotlight of hope and truth for our troubled world. Nice job!
05/11/18
You are so right. We would like to block out the noises of evil. Amen to your scripture passages.

Wing His Words
05/13/18
We hear so many reports of the evil, but so few about how those same stupid, God-fearing people step in to bring love and ongoing support - even healing of attitudes in the wake of hate-filled events.

A well-thought out response to the 24/7 newsbeat of doom and gloom.
05/13/18
We hear so many reports of the evil, but so few about how those same stupid, God-fearing people step in to bring love and ongoing support - even healing of attitudes in the wake of hate-filled events.

A well-thought out response to the 24/7 newsbeat of doom and gloom.
Wow this is stunning. Just two nights ago, I watched the news for the first time in awhile. The first three stories were about horrific things involving children. The next stories showed police beating an elderly grandmother and choking and shoving to the ground two more people in separate cities. I cried and couldn't help but feel God's tears dripping over the world. You handled this topic in a super creative way and really used repetition to drive your point home. I still have tears in my eyes. I know all of your pieces are wonderful, and I certainly can't remember them all, but this strikes me as one of your best entries, or at least in your top ten. You are an incredible instrument of God and he uses you to touch so many hearts. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
05/17/18
Congrats on your EC - Well done.