The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/18
Powerful in content and delivery.
Well done,

Blessings~
04/26/18
Quite a story; well done!
04/27/18
This is intense and very intriguing. I love the way you ended it!
04/29/18
Quite captivating. I would definitely turn the page to read more.
05/02/18
Your intense story kept me in suspense. I could see this expanded into a longer story. Great job!
05/04/18
Suspenseful and riveting...a real thriller! The final sentence was SO powerful and more so in its subtlety. :-)