The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/18
Excellent. I held my breath as I was reading.
04/20/18
This story had warning lights going on all the way through. I wanted to yell out a warning to the MC! Don't do it!
04/26/18
Whoa, what a powerful story! I love the message at the end.
Congratulations! LOVE the title.
Well written story with excellent message; not too subtle, not too in your face. I liked that it wasn’t too busy with unnecessary information, just enough to give clarity, but not so much that made me skim. Very creative. Nice concise conclusion.
04/26/18
Good job!