The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/18
Laughing! I was so enjoying this but wondered about "rash." That was terrific!
04/22/18
You broke my heart when the parents were yelling while the baby cried.
04/26/18
Great story!
I absolutely loved this. I thought it creative, out-of-the-box and brilliant. It's for sure one of my all-time favorites. Tiny red ink--remember to hyphenate words joined together to create one modifier. (six-month-old baby, diaper-changing time, full-time job) It cuts down on the word count too. :) I think you nailed the topic, delivered a powerful message, and brought a smile to my face as well. Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!