The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/18
A divine lesson spoken through one who’s heart had been broken. Your characters, especially Ola, were believable. And the call to keep God’s priorities is a great one.

One suggestion...A bit more showing than telling would draw the reader in more. I struggle with that sometimes too.

Good job!
04/12/18
You caught me by surprise. A good story.
04/17/18
Lovely!

Blessings~
04/17/18
Very well done with a perfect and entirely unexpected twist!
04/19/18
Congratulations Leola!
04/19/18
Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Leola.

I assumed Ola's husband and child had been killed but was glad to hear God had spared them and given Ola an opportunity to witness to His glory instead.
04/26/18
I sure didn't see the ending coming! Well done!