The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/18
Good job with the topic, the MC is certainly "annoyed" at her husband clearly from start to the end...

Blessings~
04/17/18
I like the part with the “notes” to herself. This could easily be me. Good message to stop and listen, instead of planning full steam ahead!
04/17/18
We're I ever so organized, my husband would die of shock! Great dialogue! I was able to picture the entire scene!
04/19/18
Awesome job, Robin! First place!!! :)
04/19/18
Congratulations on your 1st place finish, Robin.

You did a great job of showing and not telling. Even though this is fiction, the dialogue and descriptions felt natural.
04/19/18
Congratulations! Intriguing and wonderful ending!
04/19/18
Oh, how so many of us can relate! I love how you "drop in" the bit about the flowers. Makes the reader think. Congratulations! Well done.
04/26/18
Well done!