The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/18
I hardly ever "get" poetry, but I got this and really enjoyed it.
This is great. I heard it as Judas' voice right from the beginning. Your sense of humor shines through. The rhymes and rhythm seemed right on to my tone-deaf ears. Teehee. It really did seem to flow easily, and I smiled all the way.
04/16/18
Well done,

Blessings~
04/17/18
Loved this humorous poem. Your creative way of showing the thoughts of Judas delivers a clear message. Choosing the world's treasures robs us of God's joy. Great job.
04/26/18
Great poem!