The Official Writing Challenge
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A touching story with a great message. Thanks. God bless.
Well done, this touched my heart.

I have been reading all the submissions and this is definitely one of the best. It is the antidote for both rich and poor when greed consumes our hearts. Thank you.
Well done!
This is a great story. You started out with a great conflict that pulled me right in. I love the theme that the love of money is the root of all evil. You acted out that verse with your MC clearly, and it's a great message. Be careful about mixing up possessive and plurals (islands vs island's). I think the ending was great and you did a great job of writing on topic.
Well done. Very interesting story of greed.