The Official Writing Challenge
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03/15/18
My favorite part...

“Why do you care so much anyway?"

They had different goals and very different hearts. Good read!

Wing His Words
03/15/18
This is a great story with powerful truth. I love the dialogue. Well done.
03/16/18
Great story!
03/16/18
I'm with Pam on choosing my favorite line in your article! Those who don't know the Lord can't understand why we care so much. You really drove that powerful point home. I also know there's no greater joy than answering the call to foreign missions, and no money on earth will ever replace that! Thanks for sharing this compelling story.
03/18/18
Another example of the pay being too big and the job being too small.
Great characterization and credible dialogue flows through with vivid descriptions and neat touch of suspense.
Well done. I hope it rates well.