The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/18
I really liked the last line...
02/16/18
Simple truth, powerfully expressed.
02/17/18
Beautiful!
Blessings~
Beautifully written and on topic.

God Bless!
02/23/18
Congratulations on your EC Verna! A lovely poem. I particularly liked the lines: 'He reached and took my heavy load,
Exchanging it for grace.'
03/29/18
A simple but still profound message, nicely expressed.
Congrats on your EC.

I prefer to write poetry in the classical style too, being brought up by a writer. It's more of a discipline than free verse, isn't it!
You kept to the meter well most of the time, but I stumbled over a few words in certain places, and lost the rhythm a bit when I read it.
Otherwise, very nice.