The Official Writing Challenge
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Very clever piece! Of course, I thought the MC was a girl, but as I read, I began to wonder if it might be the Bible. I could hardly wait to read the ending to see I figured it out. That so seldom happens. You've made my day and also written a good article. Thanks!
Great surprise ending! I never had a clue that was coming...

Wing His Words
Congratulations on your 8th place finish, C.D.

I'm always glad when you find the time to write a story. Thank you for all your many comments and encouraging words over the years.
I just love this. I was trying to guess who the characters were all throughout the read. I was delighted by the ending. That wasn't at all what I expected and that doesn't happen often to me. You did a great job of delivering a powerful message.
Ahhhh, the seductiveness of scripture. Sorry to take so long to vivist and congratulate you on your well-rewarded work. Well done.
I'm sorry, I'll try again - this time using a verb like "visit..."