The Official Writing Challenge
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I was completely enthralled by this entry. It takes a skillful wordsmith to make the details about the atire and the routine of such a narrowly focused character fascinating. Great writing. I loved this!
What a wonderful character study within a short story, and I love the exact right words you used to express her joy.
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Jan.

The MC was well developed and we got to know about her in so few words.

What an intriguing story. I felt drawn to this character through your words on the page

Congratulations on your 1st place finish in EC.
A joyful read that brought smiles to my face. Congrats.
Loved this story. It drew me in from the beginning. Congratulations on the win.