The Official Writing Challenge
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12/20/17
I was completely enthralled by this entry. It takes a skillful wordsmith to make the details about the atire and the routine of such a narrowly focused character fascinating. Great writing. I loved this!
What a wonderful character study within a short story, and I love the exact right words you used to express her joy.
12/21/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Jan.

The MC was well developed and we got to know about her in so few words.
Jan,

What an intriguing story. I felt drawn to this character through your words on the page

Congratulations on your 1st place finish in EC.
A joyful read that brought smiles to my face. Congrats.
01/07/18
Loved this story. It drew me in from the beginning. Congratulations on the win.