The Official Writing Challenge
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11/09/17
This was refreshing and...quiet. The peaceful pacing fit very well with the subject and lent itself excellently to the unfolding relationship. I personally appreciate a story about someone who is okay with solitude but able to reach outside of themselves. Very well written.
11/10/17
Well done
Blessings~
11/10/17
The MC reminds me of the president of a local college.
She is comfortable speaking to large audiences, but she seems the most content just sitting and reading in solitude.

You portrayed the MC in the right light; most of the time a quiet personality is depicted as a character flaw.
I loved this! Introverts are so often misunderstood. You captured the mood and harmony of the women's relationship beautifully.
11/16/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place win this week, Jan.

I could really identify with the MC.
11/17/17
Very educative its in those silent moment that we rediscover our worth.