The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/17
Sweet!
Blessings~
11/10/17
I really liked the MC's character development, her subtle sarcasm and wit.

















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I felt the MC's embarrassment at not being chosen, we've all been there! Loved the seagull description.
I like the message in this story - having moved 3x in my school years I can relate. Glad compassion won the day - and the friend!
11/16/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Lucy.

I think you should consider turning your short story into a YA novel.
11/17/17
Good work
12/28/17
Congratulations on your win in the quarterly contest, Lucy.

I really enjoyed this story and thin you could make it into a children's or YA book.
07/03/18
Congratulations on your BOB.! This is a great story. I really like the description of characters.
07/05/18
Great story. It's believable, funny and tender as well. Congrats on your win, and your Best of the Best place too! Both are well-deserved.
09/07/18
Congratulations on placing 3rd place for the year, Lucy.

It is such a well written story; I hope more people read and comment on it.

I like the line about not being in 9th grade before.