The Official Writing Challenge
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A very compelling look at the topic. I could feel the MC's tension and sadness. Very well done.
Well done,
What a terrible tragedy to come to this close-knit community.

We just experienced a similar situation in our own town. A husband killed his wife, a local schoolteacher, because she was going to leave him. The police didn't have enough evidence to convict him because her body had not been found. Several months later, he left a suicide note with instructions on where he had buried her.
The last line is great and lifts the tension. I became a little confused at times about what was now and what was the past. Otherwise, I really felt the MC's sadness.
What a powerful story. You had me sniffling right along with your MC. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
Your MC is so believable. A tragic, wonder-filled tale...
Congratulations on your 5th place finish, Danielle.