The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/17
Good job with this interesting and entertaining story about All Sainr's Day. I'm not very familiar with the holiday but from your story I certainly like the idea behind it much better than Halloween.
10/31/17
This is a very sweet story. All Saint's Day is a wonderful day to remember and respect those who have passed on.
10/31/17
This is a clever way to remember a loved one in a story. You evoked the MCs emotions at the graveside of a stranger.

Well told.
11/02/17
Congratulations on your 6th place finish, Melanie.
11/02/17
Congrats Melanie on your 6th place win. Well done.
11/14/17
Congratulations Melanie. I really enjoyed your story and the way the RE project unexpectedly drew out conversations about the mother/grandmother.