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10/26/17
This story had me wanting to find out what this big event was all about. But it left me hanging with a much bigger word count yet to be utilized.
10/27/17
“Are you okay? You’re shaking.”
I could almost see your MC shaking. It was that real! The cliff hanger ending has readers thinking...
10/30/17
I could feel the suspense building throughout the piece, but the ending seemed anti-climatic to me. I just needed some clue about what the biggest night of her life was all about.

11/01/17
Great job building and creating the atmosphere of this night. It was fun to read.