The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/17
I like reading a romantic tale of love at first sight, especially one with a happy ending.

Red ink: I thought the MC was male until the second paragraph.

Near[ly] as well as I had hoped.
I could identify with the MC on many different levels.

I'm glad this romantic story ending in a happy ending.
10/25/17
Great job with a fun, romantic story.