The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/17
Wonderful story with a great message. We don't always have to do something 'grand' to do God's work.
10/25/17
I really enjoyed the story from Mark's perspective.
There were a couple of things that threw me off and drew me out of the narrative.
1) the use of the phrase cold feet, which wouldn't have been around then
2) Paul calling Mark a loser, which turns Paul into a petty bully and doesn't fit with his character
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!