The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/17
Great build-up to an ending that was clearly implied, but which still had its own twist. Good fun read. Well done.
10/20/17
This is cute. Great buildup to a funny ending.
10/21/17
LOL
This is cute. You do a nice job of building up the conflict. I totally enjoy haggling with sales people and righting wrongs, but was still able to relate to your MC because you did such a great job of developing the character.
Loved it! You showed a form of social anxiety with humour and compassion.
Well done.
I love this delightful story!
10/26/17
So happy for you Yvonne!
Congrats!
Blessings~
10/26/17
Congratulations on 2nd Place EC
10/26/17
Fun to read...and I can relate. I waited two weeks to call about my favorite sandals I left in a motel room... Wish I wouldn't have had 'cold feet' If they had been left, they were gone now. Enjoyed your article and how it was written. I'm trying to learn from the best... Thanks
Penny
10/26/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish, Yvonne.

I so enjoyed reading this piece. I needed a good laugh and I could relate to the MC.
10/31/17
Congratulations Yvonne! I really enjoyed this story and agonised along with the MC over her dislike of making phone calls. Well written and well deserving of its 2nd place.