The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a powerful story. You did a nice job of drawing me in and the ending was not what I expected but probably more realistic than what I want to admit.
10/23/17
Good job with the writing and with showing the heartbreaking state of both sides.
10/26/17
Gary, congrats on your much deserved EC!
Blessings~
10/31/17
Congratulations on your HC for this well-told story.I enjoyed your take on the topic and the way you made your MC believable and made the ending realistic rather than the ending we might hope for.
11/08/17
Well-drawn MC and a credible setting for a credible inner voice - and congrats on your placing.