The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/17
First, your title drew my interest and I chose to read this entry first. Secondly, I enjoyed being pulled into the MC's world. Well done.
10/12/17
Beautiful Poignant. Good writing. God bless.
10/13/17
I really enjoyed your story and the way your MC told it. It made me think about music, dance and deafness, and how wonderful it must be for a deaf person to dance. Well written. I somehow missed the connection with the storm topic but that was probably just me.
Beautifully, moving story. I could feel the dancer's expression even though he/she was deaf.

I hope it is considered on topic.
10/19/17
I love this story. It has a beautiful message. It's amazing how God uses His chosen vessels in ways that seem impossible. Inspiring story. Great job!