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A powerful, moving piece of writing. How deeply they need the grace of God to see them through this storm. Thank you for this tribute.
This breaks my heart. So much evil in our world. This is good writing, too, though sad. God bless.
Deeply moving story. I'm heartbroken for this family. I'll keep them in my prayers.
So terribly sad. Thank you for sharing it. They will be in my prayers.
So many things to like about this story--the atmosphere is very well written. The unhappy ending is overshadowed by the by the show of long-time romance and faith of the main characters.
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance.
Your story was beautifully written. I'm sorry to hear about the family's tragedy. I will keep them in my prayers.