The Official Writing Challenge
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10/14/17
A great story and reminder how important it is to be prepared. Well done.
10/15/17
I really enjoyed the setting and the voice of the mc. Out was an enjoyable, well- written piece.
A fitting title for an on topic story. I enjoyed the good word pictures.

The only minor stumble I noted was the paragraph that began "I loud crack...". I think you meant "A loud crack..."

Well done.

10/19/17
Congrats Shirley on your 5th place win. I love this story.