The Official Writing Challenge
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What pathos you evoked in this story. I'll be sad thinking about it.
10/15/17
I enjoyed the progression of events - the parallel between the approaching thunderstorm and the emotional storm. The ending was bittersweet and fitting.
10/16/17
I like the style this was written in. This fills me feelings of sadness, but it's a stark reality for many in this life here.
10/19/17
Congrats Donna on your 4th place win. I love this article. So captivating.