The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/17
Your poem packed a lot of punch. I liked the echo.
10/13/17
I love the way you paint a picture of these people who live close but aren't close and how they are moved by the praying woman, moved to pray themselves. A well-written poem.
You brought me right into this world effortlessly. Well done!
How well you painted a picture--beginning to end!
10/13/17
You've brought us right into the scenario very skilfully. Creative and thought-provoking.
10/19/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish, Melanie.

Beautifully written poem. I'm so glad it did well.

10/19/17
Congrats Melanie on your 2nd place win. Great job!
10/20/17
Congratulations Melanie. A well-deserved 2nd place!