The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this narrative poem very much--a great story and lots of good rhymes.
10/12/17
Beautiful piece of poetry. A great story well told.
10/12/17
You've captured sucha scope of ideas and descriptions very succinctly. Great work.
10/13/17
I enjoyed and was moved by your story-in-a-poem. The MC's life had a ring of truth about it and, happily, an ending of hope.
This is such a poignant and moving poem. It shows God's redeeming love throughout our lives.
10/16/17
I liked the story-form poem.
I hope it does well this week.
I liked your story poem.

For me poems do not come quickly but this seems to have just come naturally.

Nice writing.
11/30/17
The title caught my attention, since I'm in having a "Wings" moment myself.

This is a charming, moving and inspiring tale.
It's also a real challenge putting it into rhyme, but you did it, and did it well.
Meter was sound, and given the relaxed rules about oblique rhyme (I'm from the olde schoole of rhyme myself), that was cleverly done.