The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/17
So captivating. I'm dying to know what it is about Dwayne that makes the parents pause.
08/25/17
I really liked the title. The ending kept me guessing about Dwayne and the MC's daughter.
08/26/17
Oh, I loved this. Our rebellious children who find what we may have failed to see. Well done. Every blessing.
08/27/17
Well done!
Blessings~
08/31/17
Loved how you let the reader's imagination fill in the details. And, the ending was quite touching. So many parents are heartbroken these days. I think this ending will encourage those that read it.
08/31/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish, Jan.
Jan,

This story was masterfully written. I longed to learn more about the characters.

What seemed to unnerve the parents about Dwayne.

Congratulations on your 2nd place finish.
09/04/17
Beautiful story, from beginning to end. One of my favorites.
Wonderful story, Jan. I liked the somewhat open-ended ending. I'm reasonably sure I know what it was about Dwayne that surprised Andrea's parents.