The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/17
You had me on the edge of my seat; I wasn't sure how the gang initiation would work out.

I think you meant noth'n to [too] much
08/27/17
You've written quite a story here, with depictions and interactions that gave the reader just enough to hang on to the edge of their seat.

BLessings~