The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/17
Aww! I love this story! Such a sweet, heartbreaking progression of forgiveness and a renewed relationship.
08/03/17
You are such a wonderful storyteller. I am sucked into the scenes, emotions, and actions. Great job! Congrats on 3rd Place EC, and Masters.
08/09/17
Congratulations on placing 3rd place this week, Jan.

I liked the tension you built before the act of forgiveness.