The Official Writing Challenge
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Your self-deprecating sense of humor had me giggling and chuckling. You created many a vivid image for my mind. I'd take rattlesnakes over salt water myself, but I appreciate your broadening of horizons. This was a delightful read.
07/21/17
Delightfully done!
Blessings~
07/22/17
Your article was quite delightful, full of humor with captivating, flowing narrative. My one "red ink" would be the opening paragraph. I wasn't sure if it referred to what eventually happened at the end when your son-in-law rescued you, or if it was a separate incident. If the latter, perhaps the opening paragraph would have been more appropriately placed closer to the "malfunctioning equipment" paragraph.

You article nailed the topic!