The Official Writing Challenge
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This is great. I had a flashback of Bewitched and pictured the nosey neighbor, Gladys. This was great. I felt goosebumps as she eavesdropped. You had me guessing and going back and forth in my head if she was a nuisance or a savior. I love when that happens. It was a delightful read from beginning to end.
07/21/17
We all have "them" the nosy neighbor... and God bless them in cases such as this!
Good job,

Blessings~
07/21/17
Ugly stuff, with enough twists to almost have me thinking the Martin creep was legit! I also pictured Gladys Kravitz from Bewitched, but this was no comedy.
You've packed a lot insde the word limit without curtailing anything prematurely. Great writing.