The Official Writing Challenge
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This is great. I had a flashback of Bewitched and pictured the nosey neighbor, Gladys. This was great. I felt goosebumps as she eavesdropped. You had me guessing and going back and forth in my head if she was a nuisance or a savior. I love when that happens. It was a delightful read from beginning to end.
We all have "them" the nosy neighbor... and God bless them in cases such as this!
Good job,

Ugly stuff, with enough twists to almost have me thinking the Martin creep was legit! I also pictured Gladys Kravitz from Bewitched, but this was no comedy.
You've packed a lot insde the word limit without curtailing anything prematurely. Great writing.