The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/17
I enjoyed your well-written allegory. It's a great picture of the kind of love we should have for others.
06/13/17
Nicely done.
Blessings~
06/15/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish, Holly.

Before reading your story, I kept wondering who or what the Great-Eyed One would be.

Your allegory was filled with truth and wonderful imagery.

I think you might want to add the word [the] before Creator at the end of the story.
06/15/17
A great lesson from a unique perspective.