The Official Writing Challenge
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You capture beautifully the innocence of childhood.
The last sentence felt unnecessary to me, kind of a change of perspective, I think.
I enjoyed this touching story of un conditional love.
06/13/17
Well done
BLessings~
06/13/17
The endearing persistence of a loving child. You captured this wonderfully and also a parents thrill to see the goodness shine from their children.