The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet, sweet story--excellently written that shows the true meaning of neighbor.
I really enjoyed your story. My emotions were rising and falling right along with your MC. Well done.
Nice job with this!
I am rather curious whether this very plausible tale is fiction or nonfiction. I.E., you made it really come to life.
This story is wonderful example of taking opportunity God supplies to be an influence and blessing. I found myself wanting to here of a building relationship between this broken family the MC and God.

It came across to me very realistic. So often it seems we have to look beyond our comfort zone to see the needs of others.

Good job.
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!