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06/12/17
So much of value to be learned from this story. You are right that even though you didn't see the end of what God did - his word does not go out void.

What an example of godliness to reach out persistently to help those who had fought so hard against your work for God.

A minor possible red ink is two places where you used "come" I think should be came. I'm a lower level so take it for what its worth...?

All in all, deep moving story.
06/12/17
Sad but inspiring story. Our lives do sometimes lead to Jesus if we just step out. Blessings.
06/13/17
Nicely done,
Blessings~
This story, which I take to be nonfiction, really puts skin on the commandment to love our enemies.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!
06/20/17
Lynda, I really enjoyed this simple message. It's so true. Our acts of kindness do speak volumes.

It's always good to see you back in action in the Challenge.

Blessings! Deb