The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/17
The title drew me in, and the story didn't disappoint. Told with tongue-in-cheek humor, poor Timmy will never forget that proposal.

I think just changing his name to Tim or Timothy would help in his quest to "man up,"
Your ending was divine. It had me grinning with delight. I was a bit confused at first because when you used the phrase baby girl, I envisioned an actual baby. I thought he wanted to hold her at first. But as I read on it became clear. Nice job.
06/08/17
This was delightful. It brought many memories and chuckles.