The Official Writing Challenge
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An excellent poem- you have captured the sadness and the loneliness of many of our dear young people - and not just the young! Well written.
05/27/17
Well done,
Blessings~
05/27/17
Well done,
Blessings~
I really enjoyed this. I think you nailed the topic and pulled me in. My only red ink is you used the word 3 times in such a short piece. You definitely showed what so many teens struggle with. I wish this was required reading for parents and teens. Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!