The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done
This is beyond scary, yet I see glimpses of it more each day. You did an outstanding job of making me shiver. The only red ink I have is you didn't really need the second sentence. I'm not sure why it made me stumble, but I think I worried the story might turn preachy or go in a direction totally different than it did. I'm so glad I kept reading because you had totally captured my attention by the second paragraph. This story makes me think you might enjoy a trilogy I am editing. The first book, Sow the Wind by Gary Ritter has been published and is available. I think you'd enjoy it. You are both great authors with an eye for the future.
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!