The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/17
I mentally filled in the missing word here: "'Indeed.' I sigh. For it was not the unswerving defense of our convictions, but that we them with such iron-hearted imperiousness and self-righteous superiority." But this was marvelous writing nonetheless!
05/12/17
I enjoyed this very much! It was like reading a novel, wishing there was more to come! It also revealed the basic theme of being brought together with love, avoiding differences that don't matter. Great job!
05/14/17
This writing is captivating and superb. I did also notice the one missing word listed above. It is one I will reread to learn from.
05/16/17
Nicely done!
Blessings~
05/17/17
Well done story. It was very engaging.

I also noticed the sentence with the word missing, but the writing was still superb.
05/18/17
Beautiful story. Superb dialogue for the time period. Great message! Congratulations!
05/18/17
Congratulations on your 1st place EC ranking!! I too became engaged in the story and wanted to know more about the characters.
05/18/17
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Ann. I knew it was a winner the first time I read it.
Congratulations, Ann! This is a beautiful story . . . as always!
05/18/17
Congratulations! Very well done. I particularly enjoyed the descriptive atmosphere!