The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/17
Great job! This applies to almost every church, as "someone" always seems to question the "dress code." It is so important that you brought out the fact that it "really doesn't matter," the willingness to be at church no matter what you have on, is the highest priority. Enjoyed this very much! Your choice of wording in “What’s up, Jean? Your face is talking.” made me laugh!
05/14/17
You developed your characters so realistically that I'm sure everyone had a picture of the type. Good start and to be desired ending.

Makes me think of the Bible verse contention cometh only by pride.

A good message - what really matters - love of God and each other.
05/16/17
Wonderful message in this piece,
Well done
Blessings~
05/19/17
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