The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/17
I believe you are comparing the ocean waves with the emotions of an argument? I found this hard to understand, but I guess I am not so intellectually capable. I will be anxious to read how others interpret your piece. I'm sure much work went into this...just wish I could deceiver it correctly! Thanks for contributing!
05/16/17
Interesting introspective piece.
Blessings~
I'm not into writing verse--but you've done a great job of it, which I enjoyed reading. It carefully created the ebb and flow of argument and the feeling that at any moment an undertow may sweep away a peace being sought. Agreeing to disagree is a topic as complicated as the flow of the ocean.
Thanks for your thoughtful submission!
05/18/17
Congratulations on your 5th place finish this week, Lynda.

Powerful and descriptive poem.