The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/17
It is humorous how so many of us have SO MANY different opinions! I like the way you came to the conclusion that Jesus was the most important focus. The only red ink I would add, would be to condense the ending just a little to make it flow better with the other shorter verses. Great job!
05/16/17
Well done,
Blessings~
05/16/17
Right on.
05/18/17
Congratulations on your 15th place finish this week, Verna.
This is beautiful. Every stanza created a beautiful picture in my head. I'm not sure if this is important in poems, but in this case, I'll mention it and let you decide. Don't let your title give away the ending. Maybe instead it could be something like You Say, I Say. (Titles are not my strong suit.) Your ending is powerful and speaks volumes. Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance.