The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/17
Great job with the topic, sounds like it was based on an actual event, I especially liked the wrap up.


Blessings~
05/04/17
Congratulations on Editor's Choice.
05/04/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place EC award, Jan.

Babies do develop differently. I'm glad that Lillian was sweet and good tempered.
Love this!
05/04/17
Wonderful story, Jan! Congratulations! I'm glad that Kristen turned out sweeter than I thought at first!;)
05/05/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place, Jan. You chose one of the most 'braggable', yet sensitive, things in life - people's babies' achievements and dealt with it well. I enjoyed this description of the baby carrier: 'one of those contraptions made of straps and trendiness'.
05/05/17
Well done for your placing Jan, as you've captured the agonies and anxieties that accompany the beginnings of parenthood. If only we could realise that every baby is above or below average at any point - it's called being an individual.