The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/17
Well done!
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04/30/17
This was an easy read with a heart warming ending. The writing flowed and was so authentic I got lost in the MC's delimma. I enjoyed this a lot.
05/02/17
I reminded myself of the little league dropout. I always got stuck out in left field or on the bench.

Entertaining story,

You may want to revise this sentence: You know better than to tell exaggerate like that,
05/04/17
Congratulations on your 7th place finish this week, Donna.

I felt for the MC in the story. I know it's wrong to lie, but it's also hard to be the bench warmer.