The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/17
I'm not a poet so can't offer any suggestions for improvement. What I do know is that I loved your piece. It's beautifully written. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.
04/29/17
Lovely!

Blessings~
05/02/17
Well thought out poem. I hope it does well this week.
05/04/17
Congratulations on your 4th place finish this week, Verna.

This is one of my favorites, so I'm going to save it.
05/05/17
Congratulations on your EC Verna. It is very much deserved for this lovely poem. I love its rhyme and rhythm and the conversations between the elements of nature. It works really well.
05/11/17
Congratulations on your EC!
I like the nature personifications. It gives it the aire of a fable.