The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting, well done.

This is so entertaining from beginning to end. I loved the dialogue and the humor.
Great job!
I really enjoyed this engaging and amusing story. I liked your telling voice which gave it authenticity. Very well written.
I enjoyed the humor and wisdom coming from the MC, Gus. I liked the dialogue except for the first couple of lines. I found them slightly confusing.
Congratulations on your 2nd place win this week, Ann.

I so enjoyed the camarderie of the two MCs.
Congratulations on your placing Ann, and thanks for treating us to a well-set, fun to follow story that literally takes us along for the ride. It revived memories of rounding up dairy herds, where the view is much the same and not so wonderful if you aren't the cow that's leading.
I enjoyed every moment of this. The MC was adorable and the scene in the barn had me chuckling. Thanks for a great read.