The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/17
Indeed life is funnier than fiction! Your true story is hilarious. I'm so glad it had a happy ending.
04/15/17
A very entertaining story. I chucked from beginning to end and love the fast pace, and the vivid images.

I felt the ending was a little abrupt, but otherwise enjoyed it a lot.
04/17/17
An entertaining story. I kept thinking that spiders were going to drop onto the cake. Eww! Not a fan of bugs or spiders. I could envision the calamities that took place. Jonathan's 'I love you' seems awkwardly placed. Perhaps if some of the setting up the stage wording were shortened, you could elaborate on the budding romance. But the objective was how you bonded over the spiders. I presume. Entertaining story.
04/20/17
Great read! I loved this.

Congrats!

Blessings Leola~
04/23/17
Great story. Thanks for telling it.
04/26/17
Big smiles and warm fuzzies.
04/26/17
Congratulations on your 10th place finish, Leola.

Comedy is one of the hardest genres to write. You did a terrific job of making me laugh. I'm not too fond of bugs myself.