The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/17
I loved this clever piece. I hope you have an illustrator to capture your entertaining critters. A lovely story for kids of all ages.
04/13/17
I love this poem. Its rhyme and rhythm are spot on and its story is quaint. The message brought out at the end works well too. I think it would work well, with illustrations, as a picture book.
04/20/17
Congratulations on your EC!
I loved all your names and personalities.
04/26/17
I enjoyed your take on the topic which contained a huge Truth in its cuteness.
04/26/17
Congratulations on your 9th place finish this week, Verna.

I hope you get a chance to publish it.